Catchy!
This isn't a melody, but a perfect opener! It's very catchy. There is an awesome song hidden in this 37 second section. Good work, keep it up!
-- coocooletmoi
Catchy!
This isn't a melody, but a perfect opener! It's very catchy. There is an awesome song hidden in this 37 second section. Good work, keep it up!
-- coocooletmoi
Cool.
This melody would be great for an introduction or opener, as said below. But as a main melody? I don't think so. There is a great song that can come out of this, if you add on to it with a super energetic beat and some synth. Right after that, I think it would make a good song. Now, try to come up with something else and see if it goes well toghether. Good luck!
-- coocooletmoi
Dude.
I can't decide whether to put a 6 or a 7, because I think this song is worth a 6.5/10, but I decided to put a 7. When I first listened to the song, I tought the song was blank at the start. I had to increase sound to actually hear it. After, the melody at the start is pretty good, but I think it was ruined by the weird flute kinda instrument at 00:29. Really. This song also feels too weak. I can't feel any energy when I'm listening to it. I think it's a shame that you didn't make this song more powerful. The melody also didn't sound like the original one, but you could keep it and make another song with it, only with better instruments? Maybe piano and violin. Yeah, that would be purely awesome.
-- coocooletmoi
thansk man I appreciate you actually commenting on this in a real way and not just saying I suck. what happened with this was actually quite terrible. I was out to make a basshunter remix and was almost successful. I copied the melody but tweaked it ALOT to give it a different feel and make it not so dancy, I was going for more of as trance thing. once I was happy with th emelody I started adding other components but that version never made it up here. this is my first draft of this song and it's sad the full one never made it because the ratings would be a lot more kind to me. my computer had an unfortunate crash and deleted all my shit I had ever worked on so this is all I have of a song I started working on. I should really take it down becaus eit will never be finished, ever. but have you know all the problems you presented were fixed in the good version :/
Purely awesome
Not perfect, though. This is pretty nice. In fact, it's awesome. The start is epic, but it's not just epic, it's majestic. But the evil laugh ruined it. Really. Maybe you should take them out if you ever redo this song. But, as always, you never fail at surprising me. This is one of the best pieces of piano and violin pieces. Pure genious. Seriously.
Dude. Why are you so awesome?
This is a pretty awesome song. I don't know why, but I think I already heard this melody elsewhere... I really liked the samll buildup from 00:01 to 00:07. Then the song gets awesome. Especially at 00:25, and at 00:36. These are awesome parts of it. Only one thing: I think the beat needs more punch. I mean, it doesn't sound so catchy. The thing from 00:57 to 01:00 isn't loud enough. Otherwise, the song is awesome, I think all your "FLS (somethinghere) FTW" are awesome.
Honestly...
This is purely awesome. At the first 30 seconds you really made me feel I was in another land, which isn't a feeling I usually feel listening to trance. This one is pure epicness. I think this song would be perfect for a background music, and the fact is, I used it on my site (PM me if you want to see it as I can't put the URL here)! I am really impatient to listen to the full version, I hope it is finished soon! Keep up the good work, you've got a serious talent there. But it isn't perfect yet: the starting is more epic than the end... Anyways, as I already said, keep it up! :P
Progressive and nice, but still not perfect.
I personally think this is an awesome, epic, splendid song. But there are some things I didn't like... For example the little intro from 0:00 to 0:07 (James bond lolz)
This is really nicely put together. Keep up the good work.
heh well im still glad you enjoy it! I try to make all kinds of different intro's, so that not all my songs will sound the same. I could've started out with a bare kick, but everyone does that.. ;D
If that's a demo...
... what will the FULL version be? I wonder...
Really nice, keep it up :)
Great!
This song was great. The fading in melody made me wanna dance. The beat is catchy, and I love the way It suddenly stops and comes back. You should make an "extended" version because this is too short: just 1 minutes and 16 seconds of awesomeness! I sugest, like S-BIRKO, you make this longer, like 3-4 minutes. I'd suggest to keep the intro, it's great. No tweaks needed. I know how hard it is to make a good song as I have been experimenting with FLS and I can't get to do an awesome song. Dowloaded, I will include it in my intro for "Coocool321 Trance" on YouTube soon. I'll credit you, don't worry :)
hey dude that's awesome thanks for a very positive review... uhmm some things to say from my end are that this song is prob my fav creation in the dance category, but sadly my computer completely died 2 months ago and I lost ALL of my songs.. if you notice on just about all my songs it says its a work in progress, well now I can't finish any of them
I will however take your advice and maybe try to recreate this and make it longer
pm me when you make that video :P
More than awesome...
This song is great! I listen to this whenever I program or do something like cleaning my room...
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